Author: sumitjena2099

Reviewer- sumani3456

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Amplify(cover): 

The cover doesn't match the title of the story. The cover should be changed. Instead of red rose, you can add a person and demon in background blue and red effects which looks somewhat scary because as it is a horror story as you mentioned.

Accent(title):

The title of the story is good.but it is not going well with the story. I feel you have to change the title of the story.

Crescendo(Blurb):

The Blurb of the story means it shows how the story is going to proceed further and grabs readers' attention. The Blurb of the story is interesting and eye-catching.

Hook(prologue):

The prologue of the story is most important as it keeps the reader hooked to the story until the end. I feel you have to add a few lines as prologue as it makes the reader more enthusiastic and wants to know what will happen further in the story.

Ballad(plot):

The plot of the story is interesting and mysterious. It revolves around Sumit family and his friends.why his family and friends are the only ones suffering. How Sumit is going to save his family and friends with the help of people from his future that is his to be wife and daughter. And how he is going to gain knowledge about four artifacts and will he be able to find the fifth artifact.

Ensemble(characters):

The main characters of the story are Sumit, his sister Sanjana, his father Rakesh, Ipsita, Steven, Usman, Kaiser, Kirti, Sakshi. As there are so many characters in the story. I feel you have to add a small character sketch about characters so that readers won't get confused as new characters are being added in the further chapters of the story.

Avant Gard (storyline):

The storyline is good. It revolves around the Sumit family and his friends and why he and his family and friends are the only ones suffering. How he is going to save his family and friends with the help of people from his future.H ow he is going to gain knowledge about four artifacts and find out the fifth artifact.H ow Steven is going to remember his past during the battle. How Usman is going to avenge his parents.what is Kaiser planning. will Sumit be able to Stop Kaiser and save his family?

Cantabile(grammar):

The grammar structure should be taken care of. They are grammatical mistakes here and there. And in this story, you have mentioned about the present, future and will be good if you use bold letters for present and italics for future and flashbacks so that readers won't get confused.

Dolce(opinion):

I have read the entire 16 chapters of the story and enjoyed reading it. It is a mysterious and interesting story. And I feel you have to change cover and title as it is not going well with the story and add a few lines of the prologue and a small character sketch and grammar should be taken care of.you have done a nice job.

I hope this review Will help you. 

All the best

Thank you
Suharika
Reviewer, FMC.

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