Reviewer: hamesha_and_forever

Author: 000_aamira

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Amplify (cover)

The cover looks good. The first picture of MaNan is very well appropriate for the story. But other pictures show a happy so much in love couple. They are just best friends till the story end. Maybe a picture of MaNan would be perfect to show their friendship. When it comes to font, the "P" letter is not much understandable. Otherwise, it looks good. Background colours are also perfect.

Accent (Title)

The title is short and catchy, and very much appropriate for the story. Just like Nandini said, they were destined to meet and that's what happened. You have done a very good job with the title.
Congrats!

Crescendo (Blurb)

Blurb is a very important part of a story as it is what attracts the readers to our story. But here it is not catchy. I suggest you make it more attractive. Maybe a good quote would be enough.

Ballad (Plot)

Two broken souls heal each other in a very different way. Plot-wise it looks common but you have presented it in a very good way. It needs the talent to make it look unique a common plot. You have been good with this.

Ensemble (Character)

Manik and Nandini, both have been gone through a very rough past. I liked how both the characters are strong-willed. I liked Manik's character a bit more because he was the one who strongly wanted to move on from his haunting past. Even though Nandini believe in moving on she was still in the clutches of her past. Maybe her soul needed a holding hand and that was Manik.

Avant Grad (Storyline)

First of all, I want to say your story has the perfect pace. You have shown the emotions of the characters very well. They both are going through self loath for a long. They both blame this society for this. Both of their emotions and thoughts are reasonable. There are so many places where you have clearly written their inner turmoil which as a reader made me connect with the characters and understand their situation a bit more. You have clearly portrayed the society's attitude towards the victim or should I say the survivors. What impressed me most is the thought they both share about Love. We don't need physical intimacy to show our love. Trust, understand and companionship is the most important factors of Love. But as a MaNan I love to believe maybe one day they will become one.

Cantabile (Grammar)

Your writing style is simple and understandable. There are not many errors. The only thing I noticed is that in one place you have written that "Nandini treated her well" and I presume it should be "Manik treated her well". Otherwise, you have done a very good job.

Dolce (Reviewers opinion)

Yaar, you have done a fantastic job with this story. This story has really portrayed those survivors mental struggles. How cruelly this society has broken them and unfortunately we are a part of this same society knowingly or unknowingly. Hope this story helps some of them to know the actual situation. This is going to take place in my favourite reading list for sure. Hope my review is helpful for you. 

Thank you.

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