Author: lost_soul7201

Reviewer: hamesha_and_forever

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover of the book is the most significant aspect which helps you to attract potential readers. When it comes to the cover of this book, I think you could do better with the font you used for the title. The background colour looks vibrant. From the photos, we could understand it is going to be a family-based story which is all about your book. But I think if you change the pictures then it would be better as now I didn't feel the connection between the pictures.

Accent (Title)

"Path of Love Is Never Smooth". Here, you are portraying the struggles that a couple has to go through because they chose the Path Of Love. So, I must say you have done a very good job with the choice of title. It's short and catchy, and of course appropriate for your storyline.

Crescendo (Blurb)

When it comes to the blurb, the quote you have used at the start is really intriguing. But dear, it's a bit too long. When it comes to blurb you have to make sure that it is short, as the readers tend to skip the blurb otherwise. But for a story, the blurb is really a very important part. So I suggest you to make your blurb a little short.

Hook (Prologue)

You have written the same thing in the blurb as well as in the prologue. So what is the need to write in a prologue again? The prologue is additional information about the story. So I suggest you to just give the dialogue part of your future scenes in the prologue, with this, you can even cut short your blurb part.

Ballad (Plot)

The story is simple with the perfect essence of twist. The difficulties a couple has to face because they chose to follow the path of love. First of all, there is no separation, which as a reader made me very happy. Secondly, you included some scenes which made it easy to understand the love and understanding the couple has for each other.

Ensemble (Characters)

You have given a detailed introduction of only MaNan and Aryaman. But I seriously think you should add another character sketch as well. As most of the character's mindset and emotions are not very much clear. 

For example, the parents of Manik. You have shown his father being proud of him even his chachu too, that's what pisses off Aryaman more. But actually, Manik is insecure about his parent's love. He even thought that they favour Aryaman more than him and that's why they sent him away from them to warrior high. So I suggest you give a character sketch of everyone.

 Then coming to the character of MaNan, I loved the understanding they have for each other. You have very well portrayed it how Nandini understands him even through that blank face he has worn. For any other woman, there are high chances that they misunderstand her husband in a situation like those. Here Nandini being the strong-willed woman and her undying love for her husband is commendable. MaNan's little one is cute at the same time really mature for her age. When it comes to Aryaman, his shady character is still a mystery to unfold. I think it is something related to their dadi. And finally Soha, she is a psycho and really behaves like one.

Avant Grad (Storyline)

The storyline is good with the needed twists and turns. In the beginning, the pace was really fast but now it's better. You have shown not only Manik's past but also some good childhood memories of him and others which is really good. It helps the readers to emotionally connect with the characters. But there are some loopholes in them. Maybe it would be clear if you show the moments of Aryaman and Nandini as kids and also Mukti's or Fab5's point of view too.

Cantabile (Grammar)

When it comes to grammar, there are small errors here and there. You have to take a tab on the tenses of the sentence and punctuation mark. Then there are some points where you have used 'he for she' and 'she for he' so plz correct those. There are some spelling mistakes too. So a little bit of editing will be needed.

Dolce (Reviewers Opinion)

Altogether the story is good. You have the potential and you can make it better. I hope you find my review good. Thank you.

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