Author: mahaenterprises

Reviewed by: satchitanandini

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Amplify (Cover):

The cover was good. There were some glitches like Manik holding a gun all he does in the story is sword fighting. And his shoulder reflection is also shown. The expressions of Manik are matching. For Nandini, it's a suitable picture. The background is apt.

Accent (Title):

The title was common. It was not catchy and didn't pique my interest as a reader. Try out a better title.

Crescendo (Blurb):

The blurb was too short. It just explained the crux of the story but was not intriguing enough. A bit more explanation having the main characters would do good.

Hook (Prologue):

The story didn't have a prologue. Some blank scene(s) would have kept the reader hooked.

Ballad (plot):

The plot is an interesting one. You didn't keep it as a usual Manan Story. Nandini is a princess and Manik the bodyguard was a change. But, yet again Nandini is a damsel in distress and Manik is her prince charming. That was like a repeat drill for Manan. Also, you've never let the plot properly develop. It seems like everything was happening so soon. There was no space for one to decipher and ponder over one thing. It was all soon. Let the plot grow.

Ensemble (Characters):

I didn't feel the characters' characteristics were new except Raman being evil. Nandini being childish, Manik being mature, a man who has suffered and hence his grey shades, isn't anything new. Also, the characters weren't given a chance to make a mark. While we're still understanding Manik, Abhimanyu, Cabir all of them together, Nandini comes. Then Mukti's sudden hate for Manik, Raman's evilness. It was all juggled up. Give the characters a chance to grow and evolve.

Avant Grad (Storyline):

The storyline is good. It's mysterious and hooking. Keep going.

Cantabile (Grammar):

This was the major glitch in your story. The basic grammar was missing in a lot of places. There were a lot of spelling errors. Also, the usage of Mobile Language at places was so irritating. Your sentences need reconstruction.

Dolce (Reviewer's Opinion):

In a rush to show Manan moments Manik and Nandini's love story was sped up. Nandini loves him from childhood but Manik ignores her. But then one confrontation from Cabir, Manik accepts his love, he is possessive for Nandini. It didn't make sense to me. Elaborate on Manik's feelings and realization. You need to work on your grammar and sentences.

Avoid usage of smileys. Also, don't add your POV which doesn't concern the story. Example: (You know who). Avoid this. Not everyone knows who. There are also non-Manan readers who will read the book. So avoid it.

I hope this review helps you. Good luck!

Thank you,
Satchita Nandini
(Reviewer, FMC)

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