• MANAN: Setting Fire To His World
Author: Its-priyaanka
Reviewer: satchitanandini
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Amplify (Cover)
The cover is apt. Manik and Nandini's look is also good. Nandini looks mysteriously alluring while Manik also looks good. The font is clear except the word 'World'. It's hidden in the flames. Overall it's a nice cover.
Accent (Title)
The title is apt for your story. It shows that this is a revenge drama. It was new and nice.
Crescendo (Blurb)
The blurb was nice. It did pique my interest as a reader. Involving the characters or more suspense elements would have made it better.
Hook (Prologue)
A story's suspense element is the price. It was disappointing not to see a prologue. There was just an introduction that gave an idea of the story. Some blank scenes would have kept the reader engaging.
Ballad (Plot)
The plot is good. Nandini taking revenge from Manik is something new. Generally, Manik is the one who is for revenge so, this role reversal is really different. Something has happened that has made Nandini revengeful. The plot is engaging and hooking.
Ensemble (Cast)
The casting is the same except Kaira being an addition. Only Nandini being bold is the change. Rest is the same. Harshad and Manik's rivalry, Fab5, Navya, Abhimanyu it's the same. Since only 5 chapters are published the characters need to grow.
Avant Gard (Storyline)
The storyline is hooking. It's not any continuation but is a new story. The fact that it can be read as a general fiction makes it even more enticing.
Cantabile (Grammar)
You've got good control over your language and grammar. It makes the flow easy. It was nice reading your book.
Dolce (Opinion)
It's a nice story. Your control over vocabulary and grammar is almost to the point. The storyline is very much hooking. Keep it up. Also, give Manik's POV.
I hope this review has helped you. Good luck!
Love,
Satchita Nandini.
(Reviewer, FMC)
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