Author: Tanyasachdeva_love

Reviewer: angel_champ
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Amplify (cover)

The cover is very simple. Though the font used is good, it doesn't do justice to the title or name of the story. It is just a picture of manan. You can try with a bubbly photo of Nandini and serious one of manik and then a manan picture combo.

Accent (Title)

The title is too simple and common. Try to think of a different title.

Crescendo (Blurb)

I am not satisfied with the blurb you presented. There is nothing eye catchy for a reader. You can add a scene or two glimpses.

Hook (Prologue)

A prologue is very important for a book. It gives the reader a vision of what the book might be. Though you gave a character sketch with elaborate description a scene would present the plot in a better way in my opinion.

Ballad (Plot)

I didn't feel anything new in this plot. Many have written on the same plot. If I am not wrong Nandini will turn out to be the secret admirer who wrote the letter. The plot is too predictable. I suggest you add your own twists and turns to add charm to the story.

Ensemble (Characters)

Nandini's character was developed nicely. It did show her craziness. You need to work more on other characters. They are not up to the mark.

Cantablie (Grammar)

You use ellipsis a lot. It should be avoided. You need to end a sentence with a period(.)

Dolce (Opinion)

Dear, I would say, add your imagination magic to the story and it would turn out different from other stories. Can I have a chat with you after this review is published? Need to discuss something.

~Angel
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