Author: Charmedone22

Reviewer: KaynatK01

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover is apt for your story.
Choosing red colour for the background was a good idea as it matched perfectly with the theme of your story.

Accent (Title)

The title was simple, nothing new. Even though your story is about Kaatil, but viewers get attracted with the title and just a word Kaatil will not attract viewers much!

Crescendo (Blurb)

Your blurb gave a slight idea that your story is about murder mystery.
But a little more description could have made it more appealing.
Like which woman is stuck between love or allegiance? Because some would assume it as Nandini or Prerna.

Hook (Prologue)

Prologue was interesting.
Prologue is something how you start the story and I like your start. Where Nandini and Manik are enjoying their personal time and then suddenly a shock comes which makes audience hooked to read further as what happened?

So, the prologue was good!

Ballad (Plot)

Coming to plot many things are twisted and making readers eager who is kaatil?

But there are some plot hole's which am also not understanding.
In one scene where Prerna is calling Anurag as she heard about her brother's murder.
And Anurag does not pick up because he is getting engaged to an unknown girl and he does not like it, right?
So why in the next para he wants to take revenge from Prerna?
Kindly explain this.

Coming to other topics like Nandini and Manik's relationship I am seriously curious why is Manik involved in that case and How?

Ensemble (Characters)

One thing I must appreciate you for the unique way of characters introduction.
I liked the way you how characters gave their own self intro.
I find Anurag's character interesting among all coz he has secrets, mysteries within him.

Avant Grad (Storyline)

The storyline is going great.
You are indeed keeping the readers on hook that what is going to be next. And am also waiting how the story will unfold in further chapters.

Just a bit of advice start giving dates or time (if you can) because many things I was not understanding when is happening?

I know the story is all about twist but making it so twisty will lose the interest of the readers.

Cantabile (Grammar)

You have a good hold in Grammar dear. It was hard to find a mistake in your story.
So good job there!

Dolce (Reviewer's opinion)

According to my opinion dear, you should not have given your story for a review because a suspense story should only be reviewed totally while it is completed.

Because as a reviewer it would have been more interesting if the story were completed, because it is just the starting of the story and many things would be unfolding that time the review is important.

But otherwise, I liked your story, it is kind of new type of story which am reading, so I am also eager to find out. All the best for coming episodes!

Hope the review was helpful!
Kaynat khan,
Reviewer of FMC

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