Reviewer: sumani3456

Requester: yana_in_music_world

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover of the story is nice. I think there should be a slight change as the title says" The tale of immortal love bloomed in heavens" there should be a picture depicting heaven in the background of the cover instead of the moon. Also, few letters of your story aren't captured in the picture properly. 

Accent (Title)

The title of the story is good. It's unique. The title goes well with the story.

Crescendo (Blurb)

The blurb of the story grabs readers' attention first. Here the blurb of the story is good, interesting, and eye-catching. By reading your blurb it surely created a feeling of clicking 'read' button to me. 

Hook (Prologue)

The prologue of the story is most important as it keeps the reader hooked to the story until the end as they eagerly wait wor the prologue scenes if they find it intriguing. I feel you should add a few blank scenes as prologue as it makes the reader more enthusiastic to know what will happen in the story further.

Ballad (Plot)

The plot of the story is good. It revolves around main leads Prince Eva and crown prince Ian. How they are going to find about their powers. Will prince and princess fall in love in the future and will this love make the prince sacrifice his life.will this love lead to destruction.

Ensemble (Characters)

Here in the story, the main characters are crown prince Ian and his parents, heaven God, second prince, third Prince, fourth Prince aka Aron and prince Augustin, princess Eva, king Leo and Queen Lailana, prince Alex brother of princess Eva cousin sister Ellena, Zayne uncle of a princess. You have mentioned all characters in the story but I feel you have to give a small character sketch separately.so that we can come to know about the characters clearly. Also, you mentioned only a little bit about the characters prince Aron and the third prince. I feel Prince Aron is an important character in the story so you need to mention a little more about his character in the character sketch.

Avant Gard (Storyline)

The storyline of the story is good and interesting. It revolves around princess Eva and crown prince Ian. How they are going find out their powers and control them. Will crown prince fall in love. If he falls in love, he has to sacrifice his life for love.will this love brings destruction.

It revolves around main leads that is crown prince Ian and princess eva. Mainly on crown prince how he is going to suffer for his past deeds in this life and how his love life going to be difficult and will he find love or not?! So surely its an intresting and unique story line.

Cantabile (Grammar)

The grammar structure is very good. You have used good vocabulary in the story and you thought new words to the readers too, but while using the punctuation give space after it when you start writing the next word. Here I would like to appreciate how you have used bold for highlighting the dialogues and normal font for descriptions. 

Dolce (Opinion)

I have read the entire 10 chapters. it's an interesting story. I feel you have to add a prologue and little character sketch .other than this everything is good.you have done a great job.

I hope this review helps you. All the best.

Thank you, Suharika
Reviewer, FMC

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