Author- penpapernsharki

Reviewed by - nidz_055

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover is nice, it could be a little better like for instance, increase the font size of "Something always brings me back to you" I don't know if I read it correctly and also your name is missing.

Accent (Title)

The title is short and sweet but not very catchy, rather seems a bit common. You could have been a little more creative.

Crescendo (Blurb)

Your blurb is like a trailer of a normal story, neither too short nor too revealing about the plot, just right. But something is missing, it does not do justice to your writing style, maybe if you could include something very catchy that grabs the reader's attention, it could be a dialogue or a tiny cliff-hanger scene from the book.

Hook (Prologue)

The story didn't have any prologue. It's very important to have a prologue that gives some hint of what the story will contain in the coming chapters. Maybe some scenes which are intriguing and make the reader hooked.

Ballad(Plot)

The background of the story is neither something new nor different, two best friends now turned foes are forced to be married. The future that they have here is the interesting point, the obstacles they will face, and the mystery of her (his lover's) death.

Avant Grad(Storyline)

You decided to write the story through both the main lead's point of view. It becomes quite difficult because the whole chapter is seen through just a person's view making it a bit monotonous, one-way track. But then, that's when your writing comes in, each and every scene that you write is just appealing, makes the readers imagine the scene in their mind, just exactly what a book is supposed to do. There's one thing though, when you switch from a chapter to the next, at times it's a little confusing, for example when Azhara visited Noorah's place in the first two chapters and then in the third, you suddenly switched it to Noorah visiting Azhara's place and they go out. So try making it clear. Nonetheless, the storyline is interesting and has it's own mysterious bits too.

Ensemble (Characters)

Each of the characters, not just the main leads even their siblings, their parents are just amazingly introduced through your chapters so far. The point of view of both the leads is well written.

Cantabile (Grammar)

Again, good use of words, not too difficult to understand, nor too basic. There are some minor grammatical errors or mistakes which can be rectified by you.

Dolce (Reviewers Opinion)

I love your writing style as I said before, the readers can actually see through your writing, your use of words is just apt. One thing I would like to add, you could perhaps try lengthening the chapters, they are really short and hardly takes 5-6 minutes of reading. Try keeping your word count somewhere between 2000-3000 perhaps. But altogether, I love your book, and I'm surely going to be a permanent reader till the end. Hope my review was helpful and keep up the amazing work!

Thank you,
Nidz_055
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