Reviewer: KaynatK01

Author: Queen_of_life_Heba

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Amplify (Cover)

Your story demands a vibrant cover than the current one.
Your cover isn't attractive, Ask your designer for better appealing one mix with dark and light colours. Don't make it too dark!

Accent (Title)

I would say your title is satisfactory. It's okay as it goes well with your story but don't you think Dracula's bride is way too common? Why not make your title more in a romantic way? That would be much more interesting.

Crescendo (Blurb)

Your blurb was the thing that made me want to read the story.
It was eye-catching one. So no changes needed there!

Hook (Prologue)

Your prologue was okay! But I think specific things of Dracula's past if folded it would have been looked more beautiful.
Like Dracula and that person whom he missed their some past moment would have been more gripping!

Ballad (Plot)

The plot was common though! The same love story about Human and Vampire but still As a lover of vampire stories I liked your concept as it was a little different. 
The story about their past lives is what's keeping the story on the hook because as a reader I would love to read what actually happened in their past lives!
I like the settings as to how brilliantly you put the fighting sequences between the brother-sister. They weren't boring and I could imagine them.
Till episode 6 the story is going smooth but the story needs to pick its pace and make Dracula meet Raya!

Ensemble (Characters)

Raya's character is wonderful in your story because personally, I like this kind of character where the Female protagonist is strong, fierce and bold!
Dracula's character is not opened much but I think as the story moves forward his character would also be more clear.
In your intro of characters, The introduction wasn't properly done, dear. If you could give a proper description of characters like who is close to Raya or Dracula like be more specific of them then it would be better. Because as I read new characters then I slide to character sketch and read about them then again started reading the story.
So just be more specific about characters.

Avant Grad  (Story line)

The storyline till now is going great I don't think any changes could be made in it. It wasn't confusing and your writing made it more clear.

Cantabile (Grammar)

Dear, you have a good hold of vocabulary and Grammar! It was literally hard to find mistakes so an appreciation for that!
But One error is there in your first chapter that some words have been written on different lines.
For example 

(No matter how much we didn't want

To we have to fight against each other.)

Like you can see how it disturb the reading so change it as quickly as you can.

Dolce (Reviewer's opinion)

Okay so personally I like your story, I like Dracula clan more as they are the strongest and fearless as a vampire should be!
I would love to read the first meeting of Raya and Dracula and waiting eagerly for the love to bloom and to see Dracula's bride😅
All the best for your story I hope the views and votes increase for this one soon!
I hope my review was helpful to you.

Thank you❤

Kaynat khan,
Reviewer of FMC

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