Requester: melodious_sunshine

Reviewer: 000_aamira

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Amplify (Cover)

The cover is good. It is definitely going with the story as the story is mainly
focusing on Pratyush, Paranathi, Karan and Khushi so all of there pictures are there in the
cover also the background is good and the title and author name is also visible. So the cover is
very good.

Accent (Title)

The title was going with the story but it was common, it was not intriguing
to catch the attention of readers as it was not that eye-catchy , So reader won't be getting
attracted towards the title, So changing of the title is recommended.

Crescendo (Blurb)

Blurb is very important for any story as it is the base of the story, as while
reading the blurb only readers decide whether they want to read the story or not. Here the
blurb was good as it was giving the slight overview of the plot, but I feel it was bit too long,
Blurb should be small yet interesting.

Hook (Prologue)

Prologue is another important thing which grabs the attention of reader, and
here the prologue didn't hooked me to read further story ,as in the prologue we write some
scenes from story's future to make readers hooked towards the story and here it was nothing
like that also it was very small.

Ballad (Plot)

The Plot isn't any new it's common but the way you have written your story it is
very commendable the story is about Partuysh who is searching for family love being an orphan
while Parnathi who is having the family but due to some past she hates her family, but I seriously
admire the way you wrote all this as from the first chapter I got hooked with the story so good
job.

Ensemble (Characters)

As in the story there were so many characters so it was good that you
gave the character sketch in the starting of the story as a reader it became easy to know about
all the characters from the starting itself also you portrayed your charcters very well as I was
feeling connected with them like when Paranathi shouted on Partyush about the family without
knowing he is an orphan so as a reader I was able to feel the emotions of Partyush and also the
charcters of Karan and khushi they both is having there own space in the story as having a huge
cast sometimes it makes difficult to give importance to every characters but here it was not
like that every charcter was given equal space in the story so very good job done here.

Avant grad (Storyline)

The storyline was good and it definitely keeping me hooked with story
and the twist and turns making the story more interesting and the way you presenting it is really
outstanding so keep going dear.

Cantabile (Grammar)

You have a good command on a grammar dear. As it was difficult for me
find any mistakes so good job there.

Dolce (Reviewer's opinion)

Overall the story was keeping me hooked and making me curious to
read the further and the way you writing it is simple and easy to understand so it makes readers
inact with the story. Some editing is definitely required just look on the points mentioned above.
I hope this review helps you.

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