Hi guys, so long no talk/ speak on this book. I have recently re read it and two things have popped into my mind but I'm a little unsure as to what one to pick. 

I really love the idea of Joan and in effect Jasper. But this work could use a little bit of polishing. It has already been updated and rewritten in its current form twice. However, I have some other things I was thinking about doing. 

The first one is the idea of recreating this work, with a little more substance. Therefore, this book will remain but a rework will appear on my profile. 

The second option is to leave this as cannon, in the way it currently is, and create a second book/ follow up which would cover the rest of the twilight book series and maybe even beyond. Allowing you a chance to get to know Joan a little better, because she's a bit of a pushover in this book. 

Comment on which option you like the idea of best and then I can see what the consensus is. 

Sunshine
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06.11.21