Basically my entire outline for Echoing Falls:

"Cue pissed Gilbert"

He's mad that an incompetent person is in charge of his regiment and the commander is basically racist towards anyone who's not Prerissian

lmao racism and bias

but yee fight scenes are the hardest things to write

I think I am getting it, but making things as snappy things as possible to keep things fast-paced means a smaller word count, which means less pages taken up, so it seems really short

rn this fight scene is about maybe one and a half pages, which is longer than the first fight scene, but I'm also not done with this fight scene, I gotta get some stuff done that I have planned for this fight scene that'll lead to some juicy parts

Newsies is playing on the TV and "Watch What Happens" is playing and I love it so much it's my favorite song in the musical <3

so yee I'm almost at 14,000 words, so that's coolio

I've still got a loooooonnggg way to go, this party's just getting started lmao

OH I've had a kinder joy and I love it sm it's delicious

Still not the OG kinder egg cause Americans can't handle them, rip