Since I'm back from my "hiatus" I decided not to change the style of Life of a Rocket Grunt. I took the time that I was gone to reflect on what the critic review stated. Although that was exactly what I wanted, I came to the conclusion that I don't need major changes to improve the story. I admit that there are some parts where its, what is the word? Distasteful? Confusing? Those don't seem like the word I'm looking for. Anyway, I decided to continue with the original plan and finish this story at chapter 20 or at least 20. I'll have to go back and read the chapters to remember what the heck was going on. But other then that expect new chapters. 

See ya!