Author : RGNPBTLV

Reviewer : MisSunshiney

• COVER : 10/10

A simple, but beautiful, attractive cover.

• TITLE : 8/10

It's a good title, kinda fits the story, but it's not very catchy.

• BLURB: 8/10

The blurb is okay. It's in sync with the story, but I don't think the first paragraph attracts and would consider leaving it out altogether or rearranging it.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I love the idea. You know where you're going with the story and can't wait to read more. :D

• PLOT : 15/15

The story is running smoothly, I really like Bryson and Daisy together. There's still some place for improvement tho, but that can be managed while editing.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

• GRAMMAR : 10/15

The story needs a lot of editing, but your writing style is great and the vocabulary awesome.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
(With Readers)

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

• TOTAL : 89/100