Author : judithprieto2020

Reviewed by : srabonyislam

⚫Cover : 7/10
The book cover is simple and nice. Also it gives a perfect glimpse of the story as far I read. But, as the book cover is the first thing that a reader see so, I would like to suggest you try something colourful in the book cover.

⚫ Title : 10/10
As the book is about the main lead August so, it's perfectly matched with the storyline.

⚫Blurb : 9/10
The blurb is nice and quiet interesting. It can catch attention of readers. Also, the way author create few questions in last it was good. Good work.

⚫ Creativity : 8/10
The story is nice. I read many this type stories. But, this story is quite interesting. But, in some scenarios, I didn't feel the emotions of main lead. It's need improvement.

⚫Plot : 9/15
The book have 4 chapters including prologue. So, as far as I read. I didn't find any turning point. They way author started her story it's interesting but, slowly when the story began to flow, I feel, it rushed away. I couldn't catch all the scenarios well. Also the emotions. I would like to suggest, don't rush with your story plots.  Take your time to describe it perfectly.

⚫Characters : 5/10
As I say before, the book have only 4 Chapters including prologue so, I didn't found character development much. Also, main character August need more information also her friends. What her friends do ? Are they also do jobs or something? which I think, when the story will start to flow, it will come.

⚫Grammar : 12/15
Story is written nicely. There are some tiny grammatical errors which need to be correct.

⚫ Communication with readers : 1/5 
Author didn't reply all comments. Try to reply all comments, it can feel all your readers nice.

⚫Overall impression : 11/15
As I say before, the book is really good and quiet interesting well. But, there are some errors, which I think need improvement. Otherwise the book is really nice. Keep it up.

⚫Total : 77/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.