🥂 Toasts | Werewolf - Vampire
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Now, lets raise a toast to all the storytellers for loving their fiction!
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Achievers
Gift : Gold
Author : booksR_bae
Book name : EEYORA: The Start Of It All
(i) First Impression: 15/15
• Title: 5/5
• Cover: 5/5
• Blurb: 5/5
(ii) Flow and Structure of Events: 9/10
(iii) Character Development and Diversification: 10/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 9/10
(v) Overall Impression: 4.5/5
Total score: 47.5/50
Review: I absolutely loved the plot. The cover is really attractive and the title created the curiousity in me to read it. As I read every chapter, the curiosity to know what happens next grew more in me. There were some grammatical errors that I noticed which must be rectified. The characters and names made it feel like I was reading a book with fantasy, magic and werewolves. They were apt. To sum it all up, I appreciate the efforts of the author and she knows how to proceed with the book.
Gift : Silver
Author:jaszthewayyoulikeit
Book name: Sunless
First Impressions: 12/15
Title: 5, Cover: 3, Blurb: 4
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 10/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 45/50
Review: Book title matches well the storyline. Book cover can be improved. Blurb is quite good, but I think it could be more interesting. Love the plots, they're very well arranged and had the right amount of cliffhangers. Characters are very well described and grammar is also good just some errors here and there. Overall the book was really good.
Gift : Silver
Author: Demona44
Book name : Re - born
First Impressions: 14/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
Character diversification and development: 9/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 45/50
Review: The title matched well with the story. Book cover can be changed. Try to change the cover something more similar with the main plot of the story. Blurb is written quite nicely but, I will suggest you to change the blurb and try to write which can make few questions about the story which will help in growing interest towards readers. Plots are nice and quiet well arranged. Try to use better words for describing situations. Though character development is a bit fast, I really liked them. Overall, the story was nice and I enjoyed reading it.
Gift : Bronze
Author: StellaKMary
Book name : Darkness and light
First Impressions: 11/15
Title: 5, Cover: 3, Blurb: 3
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 10/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 44/50
Review: I really love the title. It is perfect for the book. Though the cover and blurb can be improved. Story has a very nice flow. Characters are well described. There's just a few grammatical errors throughout the book. Overall, I really liked the book. It is very interesting and made me curious to read further.
Gift : Bronze
Author: NiyaJay20
Book name: Olympian Blood
First Impressions: 12/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
Character diversification and development: 8/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 42/50
Review: Book title matches perfectly with the story. Cover can be improved. Blurb is also good but it could be more interesting. Plots are really good but a bit slow. Same goes with the character development. I love the characters though, specially Artemis and Athena. Grammar is on right track. Love the chapter layouts. I really enjoyed reading the book.
StoryTellers
Author: pretty_poison_
Book Name: Monteverde Academy
(i)First Impression: 11/15
•Title: 5/5
•Cover: 4/5
•Blurb: 3/5
(ii) Flow and Structure Of Events: 9.5/10
(iii) Character Diversification and Development: 10/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 7/10
(v) Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 41.5
Author: FmEver
Book Name: The Huntress
(i) First Impression: 12/15
•Title: 4/5
•Cover: 4/5
•Blurb: 4/5
(ii) Flow And Structure Of Events: 7/10
(iii) Character Diversification And Development: 10/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10
(v) Overall Impression: 4.5/5
Total:41.5/50
Author: charlottemallory
Book name : Vermillion
First Impressions: 12/15
Flow & Structure of Events (Plot): 9/10
Character diversification & Development: 7/10
Grammar & vocabulary: 8/10
Overall: 4/5
Total: 40/50
Author : FionaCakes91
Book name : The Alpha's Destiny
(i) First Impression: 11/15
• Title: 3.5/5
• Cover: 3.5/5
• Blurb: 4/5
(ii) Flow and Structure Of Events: 8/10
(iii) Character Development and Diversification: 7/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 9.5/10
(v) Overall Impression: 4/5
Total score: 39.5/50
Author : HLVerno123
Book Name : The Wolf Of Penshaw Lake
First Impressions : 11/15
Flow & Structure of Events (Plot): 8/10
Character diversification & Development: 8/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall impression: 3/5
Total: 39/50
Author: flowersandbooks16
Book name: Shutdown Mate
First Impressions: 10/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
Character diversification and development: 6/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total : 37/50
Author:mysticbeautytales26
Book name: Obscure |PJM| (Vampire AU)
First Impressions: 9/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
Character diversification and development: 7/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 36/50
Author: Bird_of_passage
Book name: Lumina: The Moon Goddess
First Impressions: 12/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 7/10
Character diversification and development: 7/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 6/10
Overall Impression: 3/5
Total: 35/50
Author: Karen290001
Book name: The Vampire's Chosen Mate
First Impressions: 11/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 6/10
Character diversification and development: 7/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall Impression: 3/5
Total: 35/50
Book Name: The Reborn
First Impressions: 10/15
Flow & Structure of Events (Plot) : 7/10
Character diversification & Development: 7/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall: 3/5
Total: 35/50
Author : Crystal_0808
Book Name: One Fated Night
(i) First Impression: 13/15
• Title: 4.5/5
• Cover: 5/5
• Blurb: 3.5/5
(ii) Flow and Structure of Events: 5/10
(iii) Character Development and Diversification: 5/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 7/10
(v) Overall impression: 3/5
Total score: 33/50
Author: Jennyoza
Book name: Isabella's Alpha
First Impressions: 8/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 7/10
Character diversification and development: 7/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 5/10
Overall Impression: 2/5
Total: 29/50
Username: Jumping_Jiminys
Book name : The Year Package
(i) First Impression: 13/15
• Title: 4/5
• Cover: 5/5
• Blurb: 4/5
(ii) Flow and Structure of Events: 3/10
(iii) Character Development and Diversification: 5/10
(iv) Grammar and Vocabulary: 2.5/10
(v) Overall Impression: 2/5
Total Score: 25.5/50
Username: SnakeCharmer07
Book name : Pack Rivers(Book One)
(i) First Impression: 8/15
• Title: 3/5
•Cover: 3/5
•Blurb: 2/5
Flow and Structure of Events: 6/10
Character Development and Diversification: 5/10
Grammar and Vocabulary: 4/10
Overall Impression: 2/5
Total score: 25/50
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