🥂TOASTS | Humor
Thank you critic for helping us with the arrangements - SavySagittarius
Now, lets raise a toast to all the storytellers for loving their fiction!!
Winners, please contact SarvikaGoel your respective managers for certificates and stickers.
ACHIEVERS
Gift : Gold (Tie)
Loving Too Much To Kill - theashesofthephoenix
• First Impression: 15/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 8/10
• Overall: 5/5
• Total: 48/50
Review:
Good job with the cover! The title is also catchy and fits the story perfectly! I would definitely read the book by just seeing the blurb. Even the characters talk like people I know, lol. The plot was really good and funny. Grammar was okay but vocabulary could be better. Just the vocabulary and plot holes here and there, rest is fine.
Smitten Anyway - Gayatrikothuri
• First Impression: 13/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 5/5
• Total: 48/50
Review:
I think the title is awesome and goes well with the story. Its really hard to come up with a unique title now a days so you did a great job. The blurb was also very intriguing but a bit, just a bit more detail will be good. The characters were very nicely developed. I overall loved your story.
Gift : Silver
Just A Little Salt - toxicccoffeee
• First Impression: 11.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 5/5
• Total: 46.5/50
Review:
The blurb needs a bit of work. A bit more description, a glimpse in the story, not much but just a bit more. Skilled job! Grammar was awesome. Keep up the brilliant work. The book is intriguing, alluring and hard to put down.
Gift : Bronze
Chance for a fall - tingle_wrath
• First Impression: 13.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 45.5/50
Review:
I can see the title clearly but the author's name on the top is a bit unclear. Damn! I am in love with the title! Its awesome. I love how you have written the blurb and given it a effect of curiosity which I like. I can feel the emotions portrayed my your characters. In some instances, I felt their actions were a bit exaggerated. That's not necessary but you can edit it, if you want. Honestly, I didn't find any plot holes. You did change tense in few areas, just take care of it when you edit the story. Overall, I love the book.
STORYTELLERS
Divined - evacharya
• First Impression: 15/15
• Flow and structure of events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 7/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 45/50
Cupid's Rhombus - Sassy_Fangirl
• First Impression: 9/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 5/5
• Total: 44/50
The Elf kind and I - StellaKMary
• First Impression: 8.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 5/5
• Total: 43.5/50
Thornderous - incen_dia
• First Impression: 11/15
• Flow and structure of events: 8/10
• Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 42/50
Foolish Friendship - Amiable_Writer
• First Impression: 9/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 41/50
Diary of the Silent Nerd - akeila_agramunn
• First Impression: 10.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 40.5/50
Comediology - ShadowKatake
• First Impression: 9.5/10
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 40.5/50
Destiny's Play - dYnAmIc_123
• First Impression: 11.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 8/10
• Overall: 3/5
• Total: 40.5/50
The first rain of love - sravanthi_
• First Impression: 11.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10
• Character diversification and development: 7/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall: 3.5/5
• Total: 38/50
Yours sincerely - LailaRock
• First Impression: 9/15
• Flow and structure of events: 10/10
• Character diversification and development: 7/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 7/10
• Overall: 4.5/5
• Total: 37.5/50
Splendid - MoonShine922
• First Impression: 8.5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 7/10
• Overall: 4/5
• Total: 36.5/50
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