🥂 TOASTS | General Fiction
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Now, lets raise a toast to all the storytellers for loving their fiction!
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ACHIEVERS
Gift - GOLD
Shattered - MiniMoxx
First Impressions: 15/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 10/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 5/5
Total - 50/50
The Book cover and the title very much suited the plot. A girl thought what she had was perfect and suddenly what she thought was false. It is not new but the way you wrote it and the case, how she is entangled in it made the story and the plot refreshing. By the score you could tell I was impressed by your book. Your writing is great. The way you wrote Hollie's post and the transition to reality was amazing.
Gift - SILVER
Silver Bullet - SmugglingABook
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 10/10
Character Diversification And Development: 9.5/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 5/5
Total: 49.5/50
So let me start by saying that I absolutely LOVED your book. Odessa’s cluelessness is so relatable and Bastan’s personality is really alluring. I love the small little introductions at the starting of each chapter and also like the fact that you have regularly rotated between Odessa, Bastan and Stella’s POV. If I HAD to ask you to change something, it would maybe be that you should describe your characters more vividly so that the readers can find the experience of reading your book even more enjoyable. Lastly, at the end of each chapter, try asking questions to your readers to make it more interactive and interesting.
Awesome job done!
Gift - BRONZE
First Impressions: 15/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 5/5
Total - 48/50
The Title and the story plot and the blurb was great. The plot is very good and I personally liked it very much. The Book cover was different and portrayed the title in an indirect way. The writing was pretty good. The characters and the way you described their feeling was great. My only opinion is if you could write the events in a flow rather than breaking the flow after each chapter. It will be confusing for some of them.
Gift - BRONZE
Ethereal - MileAgo
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 10/10
Character Diversification And Development: 9/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall Impression: 5/5
Total: 48/50
The blurb and cover are very eye catching. They make you want to read more. The way the siblings discover their powers has been written is really captivating and makes you wander what more can they do. The only two changes I would recommend are that maybe describe the appearances of the characters more and leave cliff hangers at the end of every chapter to make your readers turn their pages to read what’s next.
Great job otherwise!
THE STORYTELLERS
Evergreen - StellaKMary
First Impressions: 12/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total - 45/50
Pretty Little Fears - cheedeekay
(i)First Impressions: 12/15
(ii)Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/ 10
(iii)Character diversification and development: 10/10
(iv)Grammar & Vocabulary:10/ 10
(v)Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 45/50
The Stuttering Girl- SamEl145
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 9/10
Character Diversification And Development: 8.5/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 7.5/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 44/50
The Fireworks We Saw That Day- IKJun6614
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 3.5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 8/10
Character Diversification And Development: 9/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 42.5/50
Jane And The Diary- babb13ella
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 8/10
Character Diversification And Development: 7/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total: 42/50
The Secrets We Keep - NikkiLeeTaylor1
First Impressions: 13/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 7/10
Character diversification and development: 8/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total - 42/50
Ashes of the Phoenix-Fade - theashesofthephoenix
First Impressions: 10/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
Character diversification and development: 10/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total - 41/50
Alexa - coldsummerjess
First Impressions: 8/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 10/10
Character diversification and development: 9/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total - 41/50
The Zoldyck's Creed - DaisyDuckNunaStuck
First Impressions: 8/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/10
Character diversification and development: 8/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
Overall Impression: 4/5
Total - 39/50
My Unknown Soulmate- jiyarani
First Impressions:-
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 3.5/5
Flow And Structure Of Events (Plot): 7/10
Character Diversification And Development: 7/10
Grammar And Vocabulary: 5.5/10
Overall Impression: 3/5
Total: 36/50
Who Is She? - _my_dreamland_
First Impression : 12/15
Flow and Structure of Events : 7/10
Character diversification and development: 5/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 6/10
Overall Impression: 2/5
Total - 32/50
Looking Beyond - LyraSerpens
First Impressions: 10/15
Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 4/10
Character diversification and development: 5/10
Grammar & Vocabulary: 8/10
Overall Impression: 3/5
Total - 30/50
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