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🥂 TOASTS | Fan- Fiction

Thank you critics for helping us with the arrangements - Sam_Frazier , Aserranoaldana, IMAGINATED3434

Now, lets raise a toast to all the storytellers for loving their fiction!

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ACHIEVERS

Gift: Gold

Redemption: A Reylo story : brhr14

• First impressions : 15/15
• Flow and structure of events : 10/10
• Character diversification and development : 10/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
• Overall impressions : 5/5
• Total : 50/50

Review:
The cover was interesting and it caught my attention.  The blurb was good and it made a good summary of the story. The title was great and I have not seen another one like it before. The flow of the story was great and I understood what was happening.The character development was great and I knew who the characters were who and what they were doing,saying, and thinking and most importantly to me, how they were feeling. The grammar and vocabulary was good and I did not spot any mistakes. My overall impression is great and I enjoyed reading this story.

Gift: Silver

Until there was you :000artemisrising000

• First Impressions: 15/15
• Flow & Structure of Events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall Impression: 05/05
• Total: 49/50

Review:
A review of Five points ( negative and positive aspects) This story was amazingly well done. Everything was amazing but in some places the plots were a little messed.

Gift: Bronze(Tie)

Forever Dramionemann101978

• First impressions-15/15
• Flow and structure of events-10/10
• Character diversification and development-10/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary-9/10
• Overall impressions-4/5
• Total-48/50

Review:
I liked the cover, it was fitting to the title. The blurb was great and it wanted me to read the book. The flow and structure was good and I liked it the flow was steady and understanding. The characters were great because not everyone has read or watched the harry potter books so then I knew what they looked like and what they were doing, saying, thinking, and feeling. The grammar was okay because there were a few times where ,there was needed a space after a comma. My overall impression would be it was a great book but, need to fix some mistakes.

EYECANDY, wasn't it?: namjoonah22

• First impressions : 14/15
• Flow and structure of events : 9/10
• Character diversification and development : 10/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
• Overall impressions : 5/5
• Total : 48/50

Review:
First impression was okay, The Title was great and so was the blur but I think that the cover needs something else to fit more with the title and the whole plot.The flow of the story was great and I understood everything but I did not like how the story was set up. Sometimes I get confused about what was happening and where the characters were the characters.The characters were wonderful because I knew what they looked like or had a visual of what they do look like. I knew what they were feeling,thinking,saying,and doing. The grammar and vocabulary were good and I did not spot any mistakes. My overall impression is that it was an interesting story.

SCORESHEET

Novice: boongi_5293

• First impressions: 15/15
• Flow and structure of events : 9/10
• Character diversification and development : 9/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
• Overall impressions : 4/5
• Total : 47/50

Photographer: vanillagalaxiez

• First Impressions: 14/15
• Flow & Structure of Events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar & Vocabulary: 10/10
• Overall Impression: 04/05
• Total: 47/50

Swan lake- When Ice touches the chords: cattleyaon5th

• First Impressions: 15/15
• Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar & Vocabulary: 09/10
• Overall Impression: 04/05
• Total: 47/50

Personal Assistant: idkxitlyn

• First impressions : 15/15
• Flow and structure of events : 10/10
• Character diversification and development : 7/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 9/10
• Overall impressions : 4/5
• Total : 45/50

A Song of lightness and Darkness rainyday0307

• First impressions : 14/15
• Flow and structure of events : 8/10
• Character diversification and development : 9/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 9/10
• Overall impressions : 3/5
• Total : 44/50

Lunaris: writtenbyshauna

• First impression: 13/15
• Flow and structures of events: 9/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 8/10
• Overall impression: 5/5
• Total: 43/50

Coincidental || BTS Fan-fiction: cherry_blossom76

• First impressions : 13/15
• Flow and structure of events : 9/10
• Character diversification and development : 7/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
• Overall impressions : 4/5
• Total : 43/50

Unearthed : azarathed

• First Impressions: 11/15
• Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 8/10
• Character diversification and development: 10/10
• Grammar & Vocabulary: 09/10
• Overall Impression: 04/05
• Total: 42/50

INSIDIOUS JUNGKOOKXREADER: micmicbungee112233

• First impressions-15/15
• Flow and structure of events-8/10
• Character diversification and development-8/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary-8/10
• Overall impressions-2/5
• Total-41/50

The Seven Devils: thesehunprint

• First impression:12 /15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10
• Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 7/10
• Overall impression: 4/5
• Total: 39/50

The 65th hunger games: RayneBeckham

• First impressions : 13/15
• Flow and structure of events : 9/10
• Character diversification and development : 5/10
• Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
• Overall impressions : 2/5
• Total : 39/50

Silver Rose: azarathed

• First Impressions: 12/15
• Flow & Structure of Events(plot): 6/10
• Character diversification and development: 09/10
• Grammar & Vocabulary: 08/10
• Overall Impression: 03/05
• Total: 38/50

Devotions of the heart: MaisieDaisyMoo

• First impression : 8/15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10

Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall impression: 4/5
• Total: 37/50

Selcouth: lukerhsos2


• First impression: 8/15
• Flow and structure of events: 6/10
• Character diversification and development: 9/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall impression: 4/5
• Total: 36/50

The psychic soulmate: theladyofmydreams

• First impression: 10/15
• Flow and structure of events: 8/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 5/10
• Overall impression: 3/5
• Total: 34/50

The silent voice: Avery_Noelle_

• First impression: 7/15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10
• Character diversification and development: 7/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 9/10
• Overall impression: 3/5
• Total: 33/50

Love's a bitch: itz_anji

• First Impression: 9/15
• Flow and structure of events: 6/10
• Character diversification and development: 6/10
• Grammar & vocabulary: 6/10
• Overall impression: 3/5
• Total: 30/50

Fools: namtiddie_committee

• First impression: 7/15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10
• Character diversification and development: 6/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 5/10
• Overall impression: 3/5
• Total: 29/50

Wings of fire, as humans! DragonsNotWyverns

• First Impression: 5/15
• Flow and structure of events: 6/10
• Character diversification and development: 8/10
• Grammar and vocabulary: 7/10
• Overall impression: 2/5
• Total: 28/50

SoulboundScarletheart84

• First impression: 10/15
• Flow and structure of events: 7/10
• Character diversification and development: 4/10
• Grammar/vocabulary: 4/10
• Overall impression: 3/5
• Total: 28/50
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