I know I already kind of did this earlier, but I've now made the decision to self publish this as an e-book. I'm completely re-writing parts of it, but I'll be keeping some of the other parts. I want to know what you guys think I should definitely keep and which scenes can be deleted. I'll explain things a bit better with how Blake goes through day-to-day life and I'll be changing how Jake is once out of his coma to make it more realistic. What other things do you guys think I should tweak? Which scenes are your absolute favourites? Are there other things I should elaborate on? Any scenes I should extend? I have my own ideas (obviously) but I want to know what you guys think. The fifteen people who have the best suggestions will be given a free copy of the new and improved book, so let me know your thoughts!