So, you've agreed to be my ALPHA READER (for that, I am grateful). Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings. Your job is to read the manuscript and give me feedback on the following topics.

YOU DON'T HAVE TO ANSWER THEM ALL! As you read through the ASSIGNED CHAPTERS, if something pops out at you, write it down and go from there.

PLEASE ANSWER AT LEAST THE HIGHLIGHTED QUESTIONS FROM EACH SECTION! Each section has several questions. The priority ones are highlighted in boldface. 

YOUR CHOICE OF THANKS! I want to offer you a gift for doing me such a solid favor and helping LETTERS TO MAXINE reach its fullest potential. You can choose a three-chapter read-for-read or a promo video (One above in the Chapter Header and one below)of your choice (Book Introduction, Author Logo Reveal, etc.). 

PACING →

Are there any parts of the story that drag? Does each scene flow naturally into the next? Did you feel any areas skipped over information? Does the pacing feel balanced — and are there any areas that are too slow or intense? Are there any exposition dumps (places I over-inform the reader) you struggled to get through?

WORLD BUILDING→

Can you see the world clearly while reading? Can you see the action clearly while reading? Can you see the characters clearly while reading? Can you describe what the main characters look like?

CHARACTERS→

Was it clear who was talking? Does the dialogue sound natural and realistic? Does the character development feel natural? Are there any out-of-character moments? Do any of the characters feel cliche or stereotypical?

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