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Review:

Title: The Forbidden Act

Author: amour-seraph

Reviewed by Kristen

Cover

Your cover is nice, my first impression of the book was a love triangle and after reading the book I discovered that was the case. In my opinion, I would prefer the cover on the character cast part, it looks more professional.

Title

The title fits perfectly for the plot. It made me think of forbidden love as I read on I was right so. So nice job.

Blurb

Vampires exist. And they live amongst us, hidden within the shadows and right under our noses. They are beautiful, forbidden beasts; everything I've been trained to hate and reject. Yet, what is this that I feel?

Lust? Desire? Love..?

His crimson eyes pierce through my soul, holding me captive in his gaze. I cannot move, nor do I want to. I want him, even if it means to commit the most sinful act in humanity.

All for..Hardin Romano.

Anastasia Cross. Orphan. Cold. Numb. Emotionless. All of the great aspects for a Vampire Hunter.

When she was 9 she was found abandoned under a tunnel. Blood soaked clothes and tear-stained cheeks, with no memory other than a tall dark figure walking away from her. She was scared. But now she wants revenge.. from the very thing that erased all that she has known before the age of 9.

Vampires.

Your blurb is descriptive and it has a hook, from it I can get the plot but it sounds like the cliche 'I fall in love with the person no one would ever expect' or something like that I suggest adding some hooks in it like in your book especially about her past.

There are some extra grammar mistakes here and there; 'Love..?' You remove some extra periods here and there, Other than that your blurb is ok.

Description

Your description is by far your strongest link, it is flawless and takes the reader in a whole new world and some serious imagery. Everything is so well description; not too much, not too little. Good job on that.

Plot

Your story is original, I like the fact that you twisted the cliche to a point that it isn't recognizable. You have a considerable amount of hooks and twist that would keep the reader going. You never see them coming and get your reader guessing and wanting more.

I wanted to stop at the tenth chapter but it was too addicting to stop at that so I went ahead to complete the whole (incomplete still ongoing).

Grammar

Your grammar doesn't have any problem just a few mistakes here and there, nothing a little speck could hurt. Your vocabulary is wide-ranged and helps you not to overuse common words.

          "Proud of herself, Jasmine flicks her weave past her shoulders,

           'Yeah I know.'"

Here ^^ It is still one sentence and it should continue on the same line.

Character Development

Everyone gets to relate with your characters; they are not forgettable and they are realistic. From Annie, I get that Raven vibes, sarcastic and witty yet warm. I feel it will be better if you could include Jasmine more like her brother, Kai. I would also like to see more of Ryder.

Overall Impression

You have one of those books that I wouldn't just leave to read others, it is unforgettable. You've created a world every single one of your reader has experienced it and has a vivid image of what is happening at that moment. Your character makes us laugh and cringe. You could Grammarly and go over your chapter and correct some mistakes.

Thanks hope this helped.