jl5040
title: 10/10 I think the title fits well with the story.
book cover: 10/10 I love the book cover, it goes a long with the story line.
blurb//summary: /10 It's a great blurb, doesn't spoil too much and it pulled me in.
opening: 10/10 It was a well written opening, definitely makes you want to read more.
grammar: 7/10 I saw a few mistakes.
characters: 10/10
descriptions: 10/10 There was very good visuals
enjoyment: 10/10 This is a book I would enjoy reading.
Total: 77/80
Final review: I think you're a very talented writer. I liked the book and you had very strong visuals.