SunshineBandito

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

title: 10/10

book cover: 10/10 beautiful cover

blurb//summary: 5/10 it didn't give me much of an insight on the story.

opening: 10/10 beautiful start. It didn't start out to strong and scare you away nor start off to light.

grammar: 10/10

characters: 10/10 I personally love Laney

descriptions: 10/10

enjoyment: 10/10 your story sucked me right in

Total: 75/80

Final review:
As soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. Just something about your story made me so intrigued that I wanted to know more. There's nothing bad to even say about your book. you're such a talented writer; better than me that's for sure.

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)