sandydragon1

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

book cover:10/10

grammar:10/10 I really didn't see many mistakes at all!

characters:10/10 I really liked your characters and how I could be in their shoes

descriptions:10/10 you are absolutely amazing at your descriptions

real life situation?:10/10

cliche?:10/10

Total: 60/60

final review:
I really don't have much to say because your book was really good! One thing I would recommend is not putting dialogue at the end of a big paragraph, which is just my opinion but I always start a new paragraph for dialogue:) but I think you're doing an amazing job so props to you! I'll definitely keep reading!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)