AanyaSingh9

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

title: 10/10

book cover: 10/10

blurb//summary: 2/10 it didn't tell me much at all and you put "u" instead of "you"

opening: 8/10 you were thrown into it kind of fast.

grammar: 10/10

characters: 8/10

descriptions: 7/10 could use some more.

enjoyment: 10/10 I personally really liked this book because FBI is something that interests me.

Total: 65/80

Final review:
I'm not sure if a psychopath can join the FBI. I think your background has to be clear. I love the idea of this book. The FBI and homicide detectives; all of that stuff really interests me so I personally enjoyed this book.

another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)