LucyAnnWrites

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not meant to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

Title 10/10 Perfect for this book

Book cover 10/10 Amazing book cover

Blurb 10 /10 It tells us all we need to know and really captivates the reader.

Opening 10/10 Absolutely amazing and captivating. 

Grammar 10/10 

Descriptions 10/10 You described everything so well/ 

Enjoyment 10 /10

Notes: Your book pulled me in from the first paragraph. You're a really good writer, keep it up!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)