LynaForge

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

title: 10/10

book cover: 10/10 great job on the cover.

blurb//summary: 10/10

opening: 10/10

grammar: 9/10 there was some unnecessary commas here and there:)

characters: 10/10

descriptions: 10/10 they were absolutely beautiful

enjoyment: 8/10 I'm not the biggest fan of short stories but you wrote them very well

Total: 78/80

Final review:
You really wrote these stories beautifully. They were well constructed and thought out. I don't really have anything to say because it was great. They only thing is a little bit of grammar issues:)

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)