SnowWhite1309
Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

book cover:7/10 I liked your cover but it didn't exactly portray your book.
grammar:7/10 there was some grammar issues.
characters:10/10 I cant say I liked all of your characters but you did well on their personalities.
descriptions:7/10 you need to add more descriptions such as the room they're in or what people look like.
real life situation?:10/10
cliche?:8/10 it wasn't cliche but it was predictable with Lexi being popular and how everyone was separated from popular and non-popular kids.

Total: 49/60

final review:
I really enjoyed the prologue and how it helped me understand the characters more. they seemed a lot younger than you had made them to be though. I was thinking they were maybe in middle school but you said they were in junior high. I thought Lexi was very childish in the prologue. at the end of the prologue I was kind of confused if it was a flashback, a dream or something else. I liked how you changed it up and made Lexi a popular girl instead of a shy introverted girl. I really enjoyed your book though, you're doing great! also I really love your title, it's very original:)

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)