goldenlinings7

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

title 10/10 I loved the title, very intriguing

book cover 10/10 absolutely loved the cover

blurb 10/10 you didn't reveal much but also got to the point of the story!

opening 10/10 loved the flashback

grammar 10/10

characters 10/10 I can actually live your characters life and I die for thattt!

Descriptions 10/10 amazing

enjoyment 10/10 I loved ittttt!

total 80/80

notes: I loved everything about your book, honestly it was amazing. I'm so sad it's not more popular because I absolutely loved it! I will shout your book out because gosh it's amazing!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)