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Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

book cover:10/10 I really liked your cover.

grammar:6/10 you misspelled some words and used multiple spaces. I commented on some of them:)

characters:8/10 I liked your characters but I didn't know much about them.

descriptions:7/10 you could use more descriptions of characters, settings and he five senses. so when she wakes up in her room you could say something like "I wake up the the familiar grey walls."

real life situation?:7/10 I really feel like any good parent won't let their kid go out and get drunk and be okay with it.

cliche?:8/10 most parents aren't gonna let their kids do anything they want.

Total: 46/60

final review: I didn't understand the first paragraph of 'heart of a wallflower' chapter. was it a flashback, teaser or what? your grammar needs some work and I don't mean that in a rude way but there were some mistakes. I thought it was surreal that her mom was okay with her partying. your spaces could use some work. a lot of books will work around the parents so the kids get to do whatever but in real life parents aren't gonna do that if they care about their kids. I did like your book though, so keep up the good work!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)