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Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

Cover: 8/10 I liked your cover but it looks like a lot of other book covers with the fading colors, but that's totally fine!
Grammar: 8/10 there was some mistakes and periods were they weren't needed.
Descriptions: 8/10 you did very good on the descriptions. you described Caden very well but the other characters could use some descriptions.
Characters: 10/10 love your characters.
Real life situation? 0/10 it's totally fine that it's not a real life situation!
Cliche?: 10/10 it isn't cliche so far.

Total: 44/60

Final review:
I didn't really understand why there was three prologues but that's just me. I really enjoyed your book, I haven't read one like it and you kept it interesting. I don't have many things to point out because I think you did a great job with the hard topic you picked. your book does need a little bit of editing but you did an amazing job!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)