clowdyparker

Before I say anything about your book I want to remind you that these are just suggestions! I am by no means a professional:) I am sorry if I was a little harsh, it was not mean to hurt you in any way! okay let's get to it!

Cover: 10/10. I love your cover and I also love how you put 'from the mind of clowdy Parker' also is that your real name? it's really unique!

Grammar: 8/10. I didn't see many spelling mistakes but there where times were you used periods were they weren't needed.

Descriptions: 10/10. Your descriptions literally blew me away. They were ABSOLUTELY amazing!!

Characters: 10/10 I love your characters and how I can relate to them sooo much! I can actually live their lives!

Real life situations?: 10/10 definitely could happen in real life.

Cliche: 10/10 Not so far!

Total: 58/60

Final review: i have no idea why you're insecure about your writing style because it was absolutely amazing. your so much of a better writer than me like daaaang. I actually don't have much to say because your book was awesome! Please update soon!

Just another reminder: THESE ARE JUST SUGGESTIONS, YOU DO NOT HAVE TO USE THEM!! IM NO PROFESSIONAL:)