Hey guys, hope you all like the beginning of this story. Though the start seems like similar as from our favorite serial but I tried to put lots of changes and twists and turns to make it exciting... 😊

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Whole Agarwal family was busy in dancing and celebrating the success of their daughters whole heartedly... Anand, being very optimistic always believe in encouraging girls' growth and their progress in life... but to his dismay, all other elders from their family doesn't have same thinking...

No one noticed the intruder entered in their house stealthily glaring to them dancing and enjoying... their fun moment came to halt suddenly hearing someone shouting madly...

Taiji, "O Bai, jara bhi laaj sharam baaki nahin hai in sab ladkiyon me... aur hogi bhi kaise jab Maa hi aisi hai... aur Anand ji aap to sar par baitha lo in ladkiyon ko... dekhna ek din naak na kataai toh inhone aapki..." she said pointing to all three girls and Bela who lowered their heads knowing her rude behavior towards them...

Anand tried to calm her, "arey Bhabhiji, naaraj mat hoiye aap... aaj to Naina Preeti ka result aaya hai aur bachche bas isi Khushi mein naach gaa rahe the... aapko pata nahin ki Naina ne pure Ahmedabad me Top kiya hai aur Preeti ki bhi first division aayi hai iss baar... dekhiye newspaper me photo bhi chhapi hai Naina ki... hamare sabke liye kitne garv ki baat hai na..." he said looking at the little girl trying hard to make her invisible hiding behind Bela...

Taiji crushed the newspaper snatching from Anand, making weird face, "yeh sab naatak dekh kar bas aap hi khush hoiye... agar Top kara bhi hai toh kaun si badi baat hai... saara din kaam se jee churane ka bahana karke bas kitaabon mein jo ghusi rehti hai... vaise bhi kaun sa pad likh kar teer maar legi... aakhir jana toh sasural hi hai donon ko ek din... mein to kahungi bas ab yeh sab chhodo aur donon ko ghar grahasti ke kaam sikhao... Isi se ghar ki Ijjat badegi varna bina byaahe padi rahengi zindagi bhar bojh ban kar aapke sar par..."

She smiled widely adjusting her pallu on her head, "arey agar itna hi khush hona hai to Pralay babu aur Arjun ke result par hoya karo... is saal pure 45% aaye the mere Pralay babu ke... yaad hai na maine saare mohalle mein mithai baanti thi..." she feels proud on his son's success who hardly interested even in going to school...

Saying this as proud moment for his beloved son, she took the halwa bowl and turned back to leave with another taunt, "huh manhoos logon ki shakal subah subah dekh ke lagta he poora din hi kharab jayega... Bela, meri chai mere ghar bhijwa dena voh bhi Preeti ya pooja ke haath sirf..."

After completing her morning quota of taunts, she left with leaving a beautiful and innocent girl in tears. Naina immediately rushed to her Chachaji and hugged him tightly. Anand kissed her forehead and hug her tightly in his embrace to safeguard her from all devil eyes with wet eyes. Even if he is the guardian of Naina, he feels somehow failed to stop others hurting her...

Naina in his mind:

Aayina Dekh Kar Tasalli Huyi, Hamko Is Ghar Me Janata Hain Koi...

Anand caressing her head, "beta tum janati ho na bhabhiji ka swabhav hi aisa hai... unaki baatein dil se nahin lagate... mein aur teri Chachi hain na tere saath aur mere rehte meri beti ko kisi aur ki jarurat nahin..." Bela also came ahead to give a soothing hug to Naina alongside Preeti and Pooja... their fun and enjoyment suddenly turned into a sad moment for them... this is a daily routine and behavior of few elders in this house since Naina birth...

Naina's birth story...

Rama, wife of Rakesh and mother of 1 yr old Arjun, lying on death bed post deliver to Naina. She was too weak and during her initial months doctor prescribe to terminate the delivery but being orthodox attitude, elders of the family didn't allow her. Which in turn results to threat on her life.

Listening birth of a girl, Taiji, Tauji & Rakesh feels bad and leave the hospital room without even give a glance to little angel born few hours back. Only Anand and 7 months pregnant Bela was standing with her to give support and solace to the dying soul.

Rama : Anand bhaiya, mera haq toh nahin hai par phir bhi mein aapse vinati karati hoon ki meri bachchi ko aap aur Bela sambhal lena mere jaane ke baad...

Bela : Bhabhi, aise mat boliye. Aap ko maine hamesha apani badi behen mana hai. Mein jabse iss ghar mein aayi hoon, ek aap hi toh ho jisne mujhe sabse jyada pyar diya hai, apnaya hai. Aur meri Pooja toh hamesha se hi aapki god mein pali badi hai... voh to aaj tak aapko hi Maa kehti hai Arjun ki tarah..

Anand : Haan Bhabhi, aap mere liye Bhabhi baad mein par meri badi behen jaisi ho. Hum aapko kahin nahain jaane denge. Jaise aapne Pooja ko sambhala hai aur Arjun se bhi jyada pyar diya hai vaise hi aap apani laadli or hamare aane wale doosare bachche ko bhi pyar karogi...

Rama : Anand Bela, mujhe pata hai, mere paas waqt nahin hai. Par mujhe ummid hai ki mere baad meri beti anaath nahin rahegi. Tum donon usake saath hamesha rahoge

After giving a last glance to her little born, she said her last wish, "meri ek hi prarthna hai ki isaka naam Naina rakhna, kyunki iski aankhen bohot sundar aur gehir hai jo bina bole hi sab bolti hai... aaj se Meri Naina tumhari beti hui... mein jaanti hoon iske papa toh isey pyaar dena dur isko nazar bhar k eek baar dekhenge bhi nahin lekin mujhe ummid hai ki aapke rehte meri beti ko kabhi Maa Baap ke pyaar ki kami nahin hogi"

After saying this, she took her last breath and leave one day old crying angel in Bela's lap forever...

Outside the room, Taiji & Tauji was upset as they were expecting that if this time Rama will give birth to a boy, then they will adopt him legally as they don't have their own kid till now. But left hospital with lost their last hope as Rama gave birth to a girl.

Even Rakesh was also upset and highly angry on the little born Naina as he was considering her the reason of untimely death of his wife and left Arjun motherless. He has no feeling and emotions for Naina.

After Rama's death, Rakesh declares Naina 'Manhoos' for him and his family and broke all his relations with her. He was in a mood to leaves her in some orphanage, which was opposed by Phulla Bua and Anand strongly. For that reason, except Anand, Bela, Pooja & Preeti other elders doesn't even see her face as considering bad omen. Arjun has no such close bonding with Naina as he also believes her to be responsible for his mother's untimely death like his father. Pralay, son of Taiji & Tauji is just a naughty and highly pampered child, who born after several years of mannat. But he loved all his sisters unlikely Arjun.

Flashback ends

Finally, Preeti decided to lighten the mood and to cheer up her soul mate sister Naina.

Preeti said giving a serious look, "vaise papa ek baat bataao, Taiji kya mirchi ke khet mein paida hui thi jo itana teekha bolti hai... lagta hai jaise jubaan par angaarey rakhe huye ho..."

Pooja also said in complaining tone seeing Naina crying because of fat lady, "haan papa, jab dekho bas aag hi barasaati hai... bekaar me hamare itane achchhe mood ko kharaab kar diya... aap unhein aane se rok kyun nahin dete..."

Bela wiping their tears said lovingly, "beta kuchh baatein jahar ka ghunt peekar sehni padti hai ghar ki Khushi aur badon ki izzat ke liye... abhi tum log nahin samjhoge..." though she was also hurt but has to manage the girls and their hatred towards other elders of the house...

Anand also support Bela, "tumhari Mummy sahi kah rahi hai beta... vaise yeh galat baat hai, badon ke baare me aisa nahin bolte.. humne tumhein kabhi badon ka anaadar karna nahin sikhaya..."

Seeing girls dull face he said hiding his smile, "vaise mere paas ek idea hai sabka mood theek karane ka..."

Bela hitting her hand on her forehead said, "arey mein toh bhool hi gayi, mere paas bhi ek good news hai sabke liye..."

Pooja, Preeti, Naina asked in unison, "aur vo kya?"

Bela said hiding her smile knowing their reaction, "voh na Bhabhi ji 2-3 din ke liye, bhai sahib aur pralay ke saath Baroda ja rahi hai.. shayad ek hafta bhi lag sakta hai..."

All girls together, "matlab hamara Independence Day... tab toh khoob masti karenge..." forgetting their pain they all jumped and hugged Bela tightly...

Anand also added, "aur haan Bela isi Khushi mein tum bhi aaj sham ko khaana mat banana... hum sab paas mein hi ek naya restaurant khula hai, wahin jayenge khaana khaane. Aur usase pehle shopping par bhi jayenge. In donon shaitanon ke liye gifts bhi toh lene hai.. donon ne aaj garv se mera sar uncha jo kar diya hai..."

All girls shouted in excitement, "wow phir to kitna maja aayega, full day outing and masti... voh bhi bina kisi rok tok ke..."

Suddenly a Voice came from their back, "masti voh bhi mere bina... Yahi thi teri dosti, yahi tha tera pyaar"

All girls together screamed... Swati.... Childhood best friend of Naina... Swati Preeti Naina had group hug and congratulate each other (swati also score 72%)

Anand said smiling, "aisa ho sakta hai ki hum Swati ko bhool jaye... yeh to meri ek aur beti hai... haina Bela"

Bela took kajal from her eyes and put in back of ear to all her daughters, "bhagwan buri nazar se bachaye meri betiyon ko... hamesha aise hi hansti khelti rahe yeh sab..."

All 4 together, "aur taiji se bhi bachaye..." they all laughed and starts dancing again having fun to celebrate their success with no rok tok (as taiji has left for Baroda now)