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Judged by )cwang1
THIRD PLACE
The Cursed and the Killers by BlackMare25
Cover and Title:Β 5/10
Blurb:Β 7/10
Plot:Β 17/20
Grammar:Β 10/15
Creativity:Β 19/20
Personal Interest:Β 20/25
Total:Β 78/100
Review: I could barely see the title on the cover, so I would suggest changing the layout. Additionally, I did spot quite a few punctuation mistakes that made the reading experience less enjoyable. I did really like the concept; I thought that it was super unique! Overall, I love your character description!
SECOND PLACE
On Sapphire Wings and Jade Seales by Nightingale257
Cover and Title:Β 8/10
Blurb:Β 9/10
Plot:Β 18/20
Grammar:Β 13/15
Creativity:Β 19/20
Personal Interest:Β 24/25
Total:Β 91/100
Review: Wow! I absolutely love your description and concept! You used a lot of good vocabulary words that really helped to enhance your description. I did find quite a few punctuation mistakes, so I would suggest working on that. Additionally, I would suggest employing cliffhangers a bit more. Other than that, a great job!
FIRST PLACE
Her Soul by Nefili123
Cover and Title:Β 10/10
Blurb:Β 9/10
Plot:Β 19/20
Grammar:Β 13/15
Creativity:Β 19/20
Personal Interest:Β 25/25
Total:Β 95/100
Review: Your writing was absolutely amazing! I loved the plot, which really made it a very good read. The only thing I would suggest is to perhaps reword your sentences and watch out for your punctuation. I did spot a few punctuation mistakes, and also, at times, you did word your sentences very weirdly. Other than that, I loved your story!
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