Poetry
Okay, so this was tough. I'm in a poetry mood and trying a few things out. I know there are mixed feelings about Kikyo, some people love her and others absolutely can't stand her. I think she was just a person who was given a life with an unbearable strain. And the moment she let down her defenses she died a horrific and tragic death. Even though her hatred is misplaced, I still think she's an important character. So I wanted to try a poem about her personal feelings. I'm not sure how I like this one, so I'll leave it to you guys to tell me how I did. Any constructive criticism is welcome. I love writing and your reviews make me smile all day. Thanks! 😊
Disclaimer: I do not own the photo uploaded as the book cover.
You and I were so alike
That I believed your lies
When you said you wanted your life
To be tied with mine.
Trusting you sealed my fate
And seeing through your lies too late
Yet, I have a reason to bear this hate
For my shoulders carry a heavy weight.
I wanted a simple life
With you by my side
Never having to fight
A battle that wasn't mine.
I should have seen your treachery
And never wanted the life you promised me
Protecting the jewel was my sole duty
But I imagined our union with such beauty
That my heart still burns with the heat of betrayal
But what hurts more is knowing that I failed
Still, with my arrow, I swore to prevail
Knowing it was the only way to end the tale
My arrow struck you in the chest
I thought the pain would stop then
But my soul will not rest
Until I see you dead
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