✧ CHARACTERS ✧ - The characters seen here made me interested. I saw some familiar faces and got interested as I looked through it. I think it was a good way to start a story, telling people who are in the story and what they are intended to look like. I think a description could've been given on who they were or what they were like. - Rating: 3.5/5

✧ one ✧ - I thought it was a pretty good chapter, though the first line could've been a little more intriguing (to pull a reader in). At times, I felt there was a bit too much detail, while at other times there wasn't enough, so that could've been balanced out. Other than that, it was pretty good. - Rating: 3/5

✧  two ✧ - I thought this was pretty good, though I think at times there were more speech than details. Sometimes it was about 5 paragraphs of no verbal writing and then 5 paragraphs of verbal writing. I think that could've been balanced out. Other than that, I thought it was pretty good. - Rating: 3/5

Overall: I thought it was a pretty good storyline, I thought that you could balance out the dialogue and the details a little more because at times it was all details and then all dialogues. Other than that, I thought it was pretty good. A pretty interesting story to read, though, at times, it could've been more eye-catching in my opinion. - Rating: 7/10

Covers and Graphics: I liked how you were able to show us what the characters looked like in the Characters chapter. I also liked the GIFS that were used throughout the chapters I read and pictures to help get a picture in our minds. The cover is very nice, though it could stand out a tad more, I also thought the words were harder to read since some letters were all over the place.

About The Book: I think the summary matches very well, though it could be a bit more descriptive, but it is still good. The tags matched as well.

What You Can Work On: I think just balancing out the dialogue and details as well as using more interesting descriptions, ones that really catch someone's eye. I thought the plot line was good just that it needed more eye-catching words.

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I know that this is only 3 chapters, but it's because I've been so busy and haven't put out any reviews for a long time... I felt bad so I tried to speed it up but couldn't finish reviews for 5 chapters, I hope that's okay.

I hope this helps, feel free to ask questions.

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