Book Title: Seven Pictures

Review: Free

Chapter 1:

I'm really confused, but in a good way! I couldn't tell if it was an olden days setting or a futuristic setting and that made it more alluring. I definitely think you should include more information in your blurb, because I'm not sure what the heck this book is about. All I got is something about pictures. 

Your writing style is amazing. It feels so poetic and professional, I found no mistakes overall and that's rare aha 

When the man handed her the picture of herself, she acted as though she had been given a death sentence. That was really odd. The arrival of the stranger added more oddness, who is "madam" do they all work for her? And who sent the picture in the first place?

You've created such an interesting and mysterious beginning like, I can't even put any of this together in my head, it's like a jigsaw puzzle. 

Chiselle seems very sweet and grounded, I like that in a character. You wrote her in a very mature and slow-paced way which made me connect to her more. There's definitely a traumatic past there somewhere, especially since you ended it with her remembering a friend and what happened the day the picture was taken.

Is someone trying to remind her of it or torture her with it? And where is Samantha now? Will she receive more pictures? (six more, I predict)? 

;-)

This feels like a fascinating story and you definitely know what you're doing with it, my only suggestion for improvements would be to expand on the plot in your blurb more. You can still write a suspenseful description and keep the mystery there. 

Great opening! Well done and good luck! <3

Overall Rating: 8/10

Recommended: Yes!