Book Title: She's Sure

Review: Free

Blurb and. . . blurb?

Blurb:

Damn that's a good blurb! You sure know how to keep a reader guessing by a few sentences. Am I sure? I'm sure. (get it)? ;)

What did Charlotte see? Why was she there? What does she know? Who's seeking her? Oh, suspense! Her past sounds so mysterious, this sounds like a great thriller.

Another blurb o.0

Okay, I understand what you told me about now aha, you should definitely change the "prologue" title. 

Obviously, I can't go into super detail with it because it's just a description. I can't critique your characters, dialogue, pacing, setting or plot direction, so basically, I can't give a full review.

The description sounds hooking and it's written neatly and there isn't too much information explained to spoil anything. It's just enough that it'd intrigue a reader to check it out while keeping the mystery with Charlotte's past. Who is the boy? WHAT HAPPENED TO HER? 

With your dialogue excerpt at the beginning, the correct grammar is:

"She knows what happened," he states bluntly. < no capital of "he" and it should be a comma not a period.

So yeah. Ha ha.

It sounds interesting, and I'll of course be willing to critique your actual "prologue" and first chapter when they're up. But try to actually write it! THERE'S NOTHING TO READ!!!!

Also remember that a prologue is a chapter that doesn't go in sync with the rest of the book, it can be set years in the future, years in the past, or contains a completely different setting with characters that might not even be mentioned again. Bear that in mind when writing your next one :-)

Thanks for requesting and let me know when you're ready for me to go again! Aha

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