Book: Facetopia by LPKnits 

Reviewer: Genio | wOt_iS_tHiS_LiFe 

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Title: [5/5]

Cover: [5/5]

Cover is very intriguing! I love the design, very original, and it's also appealing.

Blurb/Synopsis: [3/5]

Overall, a decent blurb; however there are a few grammatical errors; eg, I don't really understand the sentence: "Can't they stop mischieving?" That doesn't really make sense...

Also, the one part where it says "**The biggest boom is at the end**" I'm kinda confused as to why that was put there...

Genre: [2/5]

I don't really see the mystery and thriller to this... it seems slightly more like a romance...

Originality: [9/10]

I was so confused the first chapter- but after you explained it, I understood better. This is so freaking strange in such a good way, I've never read anything like this before!!

Description: [6/10]

There wasn't much description of the places or the characters' physical appearances, I think it would really add to your story if you did that.

Character Development: [9/10]

The characters weren't really given too many traits at the beginning, but as it went on, more sides of them began to show.

Plot [7/10]

For the most part the plot makes sense, although I'm not really sure how any of it fits in with the actual storyline...

Grammar: [10/15]

I saw a few grammar errors, both in the way some sentences were worded along with what was in the sentence. For example: "He should at his centre before 8 in the morning. But, it's already quarter past seven." Technically, the guy isn't even late if he's supposed to be there by eight and it's not even seven thirty. Also, "He should at" should actually be "He should be at". You needed to add another word. Also, I noticed that you often put a dash in between word when it doesn't make sense for it to be there.

Structure: [4/5]

Structure is correct, new paragraphs started at the right places, paragraphs aren't too long but are often quite short.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [8/10]

Spelling is often accurate, although the wrong word was occasionally used or the sentence should have been worded differently.

Overall Enjoyment: [7/10]

It was a good story, and I enjoyed reading it, although I think there are a lot of things you could improve on...

Total: [75/100]