66 | D.S. Dodie | Frosted
Book: Frosted by MagicalReads
Reviewer: ShyBananaMuffin
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☆Title: 5/5
☆Genre: 5/5
☆Cover: 4/5
The subtitles are a bit too small to read.
☆Blurb: 5/5
☆Description: 9/10
Nice job at setting the scene.
☆Originality: 10/10
Very unique story-line.
☆Plot: 9/10
A clear and distinct plot as well as subplots.
☆Character Development: 9/10
Great characterization. You stayed true to the original characters and also made them your own which is harder than it sounds.
☆Grammar/Punctuation: 9/10
There's minor punctuation mistakes.
☆Vocabulary: 10/10
☆Structure: 10/10
☆Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
It's been a long while since I've read fanfics and your story made me wonder why I stopped. Honestly, you wrote this beautifully. There was a great narrative notice and the flow was perfect! Let's not forget that you have awesome story-telling gifts. Also, that prologue ending was complete and utter GOLD.
Your story-line is well thought out with a main plot and subplots. The suspense was so good. Let me tell you, I got really into the book and totally forgot I was doing a review. Literally, the way you write made me want to keep reading. If it isn't obvious, I added your book to my library, lol.
Honestly, I don't have much criticism. You're talented! Well done and thank you so much for choosing me as your reviewer.
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