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60 | D.S. Dodie | A Light in My Darkness

Book: A Light in My Darkness by Xanatos_Gambit 

Reviewer: ShyBananaMuffin

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☆Title: 5/5

☆Genre: 5/5

☆Cover: 5/5

☆Blurb: 4/5

☆Description: 8/10

Good use of descriptive words. I'd recommend setting the scene more.

☆Originality: 20/10

☆Plot: 9/10

☆Character Development: 9/10

Great characterization. Each of your characters have a distinct voice, individuality, and depth. They each felt like real people.

☆Grammar/Punctuation: 8/10

There's minor punctuation mistakes and a few run-on sentences.

☆Vocabulary: 10/10

☆Structure: 8/10

☆Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

Your story is really good. There's a plot and subplots. The storyline was thought out and your characterization is the icing on the cake. Despite the small errors that I detected, this is really good.

Nice work and thank you for choosing me as your reviewer. I really appreciate it!

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