
60 | D.S. Dodie | A Light in My Darkness
Book: A Light in My Darkness by Xanatos_Gambit
Reviewer: ShyBananaMuffin
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☆Title: 5/5
☆Genre: 5/5
☆Cover: 5/5
☆Blurb: 4/5
☆Description: 8/10
Good use of descriptive words. I'd recommend setting the scene more.
☆Originality: 20/10
☆Plot: 9/10
☆Character Development: 9/10
Great characterization. Each of your characters have a distinct voice, individuality, and depth. They each felt like real people.
☆Grammar/Punctuation: 8/10
There's minor punctuation mistakes and a few run-on sentences.
☆Vocabulary: 10/10
☆Structure: 8/10
☆Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Your story is really good. There's a plot and subplots. The storyline was thought out and your characterization is the icing on the cake. Despite the small errors that I detected, this is really good.
Nice work and thank you for choosing me as your reviewer. I really appreciate it!
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