Hope is the Thing with Feathers - paddiecake999 

Reviewer - creative_maverick_Mo 

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Title [5/5]

I loved your title. It gave your book a very mysterious edge and it was in line with the storyline. Hope is truly a thing with feathers because it is mysterious, beautiful and delicate (too much pressure and it would be damaged, too little pressure and it would not be optimally put to work). It was beautiful. Good job!

Cover [3/5]

Your cover was pretty and it was very aesthetically appealing however, I couldn't really read the fonts on it. I think you should make the font bolder and a different colour so it will be legible. Also, your name wasn't on it. Was that intentional?

Blurb [3/5]

First, I think you should get rid of the quote in the beginning. It's unnecessary. I also think you should reframe the "cast away like she's nothing" part because she isn't cast away by anyone. It's just the way society is (sighs deeply). I think you should make it something like "But no matter how hard she tries, she's still of no value in a society that consists only of the oppressor and the oppressed."

Genre [3/5]

Even though there was a lot of romance in your book, I think it would be better described as a tragedy (because it was so sad!! *inserts crying emoji*)

I mean Frankie died before they even had a chance to explore their feelings for each other so I think you should change that.

Originality [8/10]

I thought your plot was very original. It was unique and intriguing. I also liked how you made it brief but made the plot move in an engaging pace. However, I had a little problem understanding the part where the children are the labourers. What about the parents? It wouldn't have been an issue if you hadn't brought them into the mix but personally I feel that no parent would let their children do labouring work without a background explanation.

Description [10/10]

Your description was very vivid and also very detailed. I had no problem understanding what was going on and you gave me enough ammunition tom= imagine a whole new world (breaks out into a song and sings "a whole new world!!!!")

But seriously your description was great.

Structure [5/5]

The structure of your book was great and unique. The plot was orderly and timely. Beautiful!

Vocabulary/Spelling [8/10]

Your spelling was spot on and your use of grammar was interesting but you made use of some unnecessary words and terms like "blissful forgetfulness" and "legitimacy of clouds." Also you made use of some terms that didn't do justice to what you were trying to describe like "incandescent sun." aside from that it was great.

Overall Enjoyment [10/10]

I really enjoyed your book. I had a wonderful time reading it too. I wouldn't have even given any corrections at all but this is a review and I'm supposed to make your writing better (I'm lying. I love criticising stuff. Hehehe!).

Overall, this was a great book. Kudos!

Question: When you gon' write more stuff?