Quisecent Storms - wxsikx

Reviewer - cwang1

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Title [5/5]

Wow! I love it.

Cover: [3.5/5]

It is a bit boring, and I would recommend adding other elements to it, but I did like how you blended two different pictures. The title also really stands out, so the only thing I would suggest is adding more to the cover.

Blurb: [2/5]

I did find quite a few grammatical errors. For example, you didn't put a space after the commas and you also didn't space the dialogue correctly. I would recommend going back and fixing this, maybe even with an editor. Other than that, good job with the content.

Genre: [5/5]

Nice!

Originality: [10/10]

Wow! Your plot was definitely very original, so good job.

Plot: [9/10]

Your plot was very interesting, and I liked how you developed it over time.

Grammar: [5/15]

I think your grammar was your biggest issue. You had quite a few problems, and your punctuation was not formatted correctly. I would recommend going back over your writing. You also often made really long sentences that were sometimes comma splices, so I would suggest looking out for that. Finally, you need to put a return after dialogue.

Structure: [2/5]

You often put your paragraphs in huge chunks, so I would suggest breaking it up into smaller chunks to have the reader process it easier.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [9.5/10]

Your vocabulary was pretty good, so nice job with that! Your spelling was also pretty nice, so good job.

Overall Enjoyment: [7/10]

Overall, you had a pretty interesting concept. I would just recommend working a bit on your grammar.