Blue Blood - mvkiimouse-

Reviewer - cwang1

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Title [5/5]

Interesting! I love how it's in a fancy font.

Cover: [3.5/5]

I can barely see the faint outline of a castle in the background, and I'm not sure if it's just my own imagination or something. Even if making it so dark has some sort of symbolism, I would recommend making the background a bit lighter. When I first glanced at the cover, it looked like there was a bunch of blank space which looked really weird. Other than that, the font for the part about "book one of the blue bloods series" was a bit too fancy and unreadable, so just watch out for that.

Blurb: [4.5/5]

Amazing! This seems like a novel right up my alley. I did just spot a few minor mistakes, so just watch out for that. Other than that, you had such a captivating blurb.

Genre: [5/5]

Nice!

Originality: [10/10]

You definitely get full points in this category. I haven't read any book like yours.

Description: [8/10]

Your description was pretty good, but I would recommend perhaps adding a bit more description and also adding description that appeals to the reader's senses.

Character Development: [8.25/10]

Your character development was pretty good, and you were especially good at portraying the emotions and thoughts of the characters. I would suggest just adding more about the background and motives of the characters.

Plot: [10/10]

Amazing! I definitely loved the plot and it was such a unique concept. I also loved how you added a lot of dialogue. I also especially enjoyed your cliffhangers.

Grammar: [14/15]

Your grammar was definitely amazing. I loved the flow of your sentences and you didn't have very many mistakes. I would just recommend perhaps making your writing a bit more concise; other than that, I have no suggestions.

Structure: [4.5/5]

Your structure was pretty good, but I would suggest using the structure to put more emphasis on certain sentences. I liked how you put the more impactful sentences at the end of the paragraphs though.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [7.5/10]

Your spelling was on-point and I couldn't spot any errors, but I would suggest using a more expansive vocabulary. While you did have a unique word here or there, just make sure to use more vocabulary in your description.

Overall Enjoyment: [10/10]

Your book was so good! I don't have many critiques because it was so good. I loved the whole plotline and the writing overall was amazing.