Poems from the Heart - SonaNaka004

Reviewer - cwang1

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Title [5/5]

Interesting!

Cover: [1/5]

I could barely see the title in the cover. I don't know if this is meant to be symbolism or something like that, but you should still have the reader see the title. Additionally, it looks like you put your username in super small text next to the title, but it is barely visible, so try making it bigger. I really liked the background image though.

Blurb: [2.5/5]

Your blurb was okay, and I liked how you asked rhetorical questions in it, but I feel that the blurb should include more about what your poems include. Thus, you could maybe add a sample poem into the blurb.

Genre: [5/5]

It fits!

Originality: [9/10]

You had some very interesting and unique topics. Your poetry was definitely different from the rest of the poetry I have read.

Description: [7.5/10]

Your description was a little bit bland for my taste, but I really liked your use of repetition that helped to further the poem. I would suggest improving the vocabulary in your poems.

Grammar: [14/15]

I really liked the structure and grammar of your poems, so good job here!

Theme: [5/5]

You made the theme really clear in your poems!

Vocabulary/Spelling: [6.5/10]

I thought that you should perhaps use some more unique vocabulary words. Since poetry relies a lot on the tone and diction, I would suggest perhaps using more tone-specific words. Your vocabulary was a little basic and didn't really fit in with the tone, so I would just watch out for that. Other than that, good job with your spelling.

Overall Enjoyment: [7.5/10]

Overall, you had a good collection of poems, and I would just work on the vocabulary and tone. I really liked how unique your poems were!