With Love, Your Killer - Salmaumar73

Reviewer - cwang1

Title [5/5]

Pretty good! It drew me in really well, as it had me wondering why his/her killer loved him/her.

Cover: [4/5]

I think you put your author name at the bottom, and I could barely see that, so try to change that. Also, I think maybe you could make it a lighter shade. Other than that, I liked how the rose was easily visible, and the design of the cover was very clear and distinct.

Blurb: [3.5/5]

The blurb was just the right length for me, so good job with that! I thought that the beginning was a bit weird; it should be put at the end, in my mind, to have more of an impact, and I think that you should remove the ellipsis. Other than that, I did spot a few punctuation mistakes. However, the content was very good, so great job!

Genre: [5/5]

It fits the genre well!

Originality: [8/10]

Your book had some cliche concepts, like one a queen bee. However, I liked your personal take on it, and how you kind of incorporated a mystery and thriller concept, rather than the cliche romance plotline. Great job!

Description: [8/10]

I thought that your description was pretty good, though it didn't really stick out or anything to me. I think that if you could use some more vocabulary, that would really help to improve the description. However, you did have quite a bit of description, so good job with that. Also, I liked how you really used the 5 senses, in a way. You often depicted something like the trees rustling or some kind of color and sight.

Character Development: [7/10]

The character description and development was above average; I liked how you used dialogue to really get the reader to know more about the characters and to shape each character. However, I did feel that some of the descriptions didn't do this as well, so just watch out for that. Great job overall though!

Plot: [9/10]

Your plot was really intriguing! I thought that it was pretty cool, and a generally new concept. I felt that you should perhaps have a little more dialogue and try to spread it out a bit more. Other than that, I thought that your chapter endings were pretty complete, so good job with that! Perhaps you could make the flow between chapters a bit better, but other than that, I don't have too many suggestions! I also felt that the pace of your plot was just right, not too fast nor slow.

Grammar: [14/15]

Your grammar was really good! For the most part, I didn't see many grammatical errors. There were a few instances where there was a punctuation mistake, like having an extra comma. I would just recommend watching out for that. Great job in this category though!

Structure: [4/5]

Your structure was, overall, pretty good. I liked how you used one-line paragraphs to really emphasize sentences. I did spot a few places where the structure looked a bit different from the rest, so I would just recommend fixing that up.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [7/10]

I felt that your vocabulary was mostly pretty average. You didn't have super amazing vocabulary words, so I would suggest adding more. However, your spelling was really good. I didn't spot any mistakes!

Overall Enjoyment: [9/10]

Overall, your book is so unique and developed! The whole is wonderfully crafted; great job!