Reminiscenes left by... - mimi_weasley

Reviewer - cwang1

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Title [2/5]

Your title was a bit weird. "Left" and "By" wasn't capitalized as they should be, and I couldn't figure out why you had the ellipsis. It also didn't really draw me in; while I liked the word "Reminiscences" in the title, the "left by" felt a bit weird to me.

Cover: [3/5]

I actually couldn't see about half of the text on your cover. The text at the top was extremely small; I basically couldn't read it. Additionally, "Reminiscences" is way too dark to see, so I would suggest changing the color. I did, however, really like the font of your text. It really popped out and suited your cover.

Blurb: [3/5]

There were a ton of punctuation errors in your blurb that I think would be pretty easy to fix. Mainly, it was putting a space before punctuation, which you don't need to do. Other than that, I really liked the content of your blurb. I thought that it would really draw readers into your story, and I liked how you ended it with your achievements.

Genre: [5/5]

Yes, it fits the genre!

Originality: [10/10]

Yup! Your poems are super original! I thought that they explored very unique concepts, so good job in this category!

Description: [9/10]

Because of your vocabulary, I thought that your description was really good! There isn't much that I want to say in this aspect.

Character Development: [10/10]

I mean, aside from the narrator, you didn't have many characters, which is acceptable since it's poetry.

Plot/meaning: [7/10]

[Note: I put in meaning because I felt that that is a very important part of poetry.) I thought that you definitely had a pretty cool plot; you were able to keep the reader interested through your vivid description. However, I thought that the deeper meaning of your poems wasn't really clear enough. You seemed to not really emphasize a message that much.

Grammar: [11/15]

Since you're doing poetry, you're technically allowed to play around with grammar a bit. However, I would like to touch on your punctuation, which was a little strange. You tended to put a space before punctuation, which you don't need to do. This was kind of distracting to me while I read it, so try changing that.

Structure: [3/5]

I felt that your structure was super weird. You tended to have either super long lines in your poem or super short ones. While this is okay, I'm not completely sure why you broke your lines up that way. It didn't really flow in my opinion, so I would suggest changing it.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [9/10]

Your vocabulary was really good! You used a wide expanse of vocab that really helped your description. The only thing I would say is that you tended to repeat the same words over and over again, something you might want to avoid doing. I also didn't spot any spelling mistakes.

Overall Enjoyment: [8/10]

While the form of your poems was a bit weird, I thought that they explored very interesting concepts!