
131 | Pranjal | The Lost Art of Words
Reviewer: papersxpen
The Lost Art of Words: KristinaKurtauli
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TITLE- 3.5/5
It doesn't make much sense in comparison with the context of the poems inside. However, it does suite with the genre.
COVER- 3.5/5
The cover doesn't match much with the title. Its much of a haunted genre. It doesn't look good in comparison with the genre your book is set in. However, as a stand alone it is good. Judging the cover alone, I might not be much intrigued with it.
BLURB- 4/5
Well, it is a poetry genre book so I'll be down to hitting that read button. And honestly it is a nice blurb. however the blurb doesn't seem to resonate much with the ideas inside the book.
COHERENCE OF STRUCTURE-7/10
I wasn't much fond of your writing style. your writings seem more suitable for paragraphs than poetry you sure have tried doing free verse which might get tricky to nail for the people who have just begun with it. I would suggest you to try and add some poetic devices too since I can't seem to find much or none at all.
you have put words as a thought rather than conveying them through poetic means. plus the repetition of words at every other instance is not making it pretty rather dull.
I'd suggest you to shift onto rhyming poetry or if not try reading free verses and getting inspirations and ideas from them because I sense a novice poet but it doesn't have to be like that, it wont be you know.
ORIGINALITY- 8/10
your ideas are similar to what i have come across in other poems but some of them are not so I got to give you that.
STRUCTURE- 6.5/10
well each poem is a separate one and there isn't a low i could make out but in each poems singularly there does seem to be a flow from which you do tend to drift apart but altogether it combines and concludes satisfactorily in the end.
LANGUAGE-6/10
your language is of a pretty basic level and is not much tricky to get and there ain't much imagery or a strong ones used.
GRAMMAR- 15/15
I didn't seem to have any problem with grammar
OVERALL ENJOYMENT- 3/5
i wont wish to read further more due to the reason being that your ideas are not what i wish to read at the moment and also I'm not much intrigued with your writing style but i do believe that you will gt better in the future.
TOTAL- 56.5/75
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